The Storm Pit…
Daddy dug a big hole in the side of the hill that edged the land near our tiny clapboard house. With shovel and pick in those big calloused hands he worked all day at the crimson clay dirt, I played while he labored making me a safe place to hide from the evil of the tornado’s that claimed domination over our valley. I ask why he was working so hard, I wanted to go fishing. “The Spring House is not safe”! He kept digging. The day over, the promised fishing trip complete and months passed when daddy looked at the sky and told me to get a jar of water and come with him to the storm pit. I entered the dark hole in the hill, daddy lit a lamp. Roots ripe as old bait dangled from the ceiling covered by old mildewed crates. Their wicked necks looked like snakes. It stank, leaf mold and slippery planks. Even the dirt kept breathing small claustrophobic breaths. I never entered the “pit” again, I would take my chances with a tornado!
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Beautiful symbolism. It’s all just crooked-looking snakes in the light of it all under Father’s big lamp 🙂
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Beautiful symbolism. It’s all just crooked-looking snakes under the light of Father’s big lamp! Amen 🙂
Ann, I just love this! We hid in our bomb shelter from tornadoes :).
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Ah…when my children were little we spoke of putting in a bomb shelter as we lived in Alabama during the Cuban Crisis. Thank you for stopping by. ajm
I wonder how many people had them!
everyone in the south in the 30’s,40’s
Wow, I had no idea! We were the only ones I knew about by us (in Michigan).
Wonderfully penned Ann.
Thank you so much Don…:-)
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