In the distant sky brooding

clouds roll, like boulders

between our souls, mine

trapped in human form;

yours in heaven gracefully


A tear, a prayer, is that your

light flickering from afar, my

eyes are dim I can no longer

cry; still I cannot say good-bye.

I had no power to save you,

weakness lies within me,

bitterness follows me in my

dreams; nothing will ever be

the same, nothing is truly, as

it seems.




32 thoughts on “Bitterness…

  1. This is a really powerful poem which, I feel, truly captures both the sense of loss and our inability to accept it. I always like the way you manage to convey sentiment without becoming sentimental, and I admire the way in which you choose to structure your writing.
    Take care, Chris


  2. Today I truly wish you that you will feel better. Overcome that that does not seem to be endurable. Just because I am in a mood where nobody should suffer. Sorry for my bad English.


  3. Buna ziua!…De doua zile am schimbat numele la blog…deoarece au fost neintelegeri si am fost nevoita sa schimb numele la blog. Eu sunt aceiasi Ileana si va astept in casuta mea virtuala cand doriti si cand puteti!…O zi frumoasa alaturi de familie!…Noua mea adresa…

    Hello! … Two days ago I changed the name of the blog … because they were misunderstanding and I had to change the name of the blog. I am the same Ileana and wait in my virtual box when you want and when you can! … A beautiful day with your family! … My new address …


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